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some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some
people
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 believe that cultural
traditions
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 are ruined when
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 use them to earn money and the opposites claim that using them a make money is the other way to protect them forever. In my opinion, both views have their own advantages and will give the reasons why.
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 with, several customs are modified for commercialization and end up losing their original value.
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, Vietnamese traditional dances
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 as lion dance are now often poorly performed by amateurs at tourist sites across the country.
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 changes not only give foreign visitors a false impression
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 but can
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 make the dance less meaningful to the local
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.
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, a well-known YouTuber visited Japan and filmed himself sumping a bag of coins into a sacred well, where
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 often drop coins for luck, and
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 permanent damage to one of Japan's most famous iconic
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.
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, there are several reasons why monetizing from cultural
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 is the only way to protect them.
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the revenue could be used for the preservation of
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by putting
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 on public display, the government could heighten
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's awareness of preserving these
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.
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, the Vietnamese government has built several museums around the country that solely exhibit images of ethnic minority cultures in an attempt to protect cultural values without affecting the lives of these ethnic
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, yet successfully gathering lots of public attention and support. In conclusion, using cultural
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 as
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 attraction has both positive and negative impacts on the preservation of
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traditions
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