some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is very unwise to underestimate the important role
culture
plays in each country all over the world and for that reason, many questions are raised about how to properly protect cultural Use synonyms
values
. Use synonyms
While
many Linking Words
people
think Use synonyms
culture
should not be used to take advantage of Use synonyms
tourism
revenue. It is considered by some Use synonyms
people
that Use synonyms
tourism
is the best option for many individuals to approach and preserve cultural Use synonyms
values
. From my perspective, I think that Use synonyms
tourism
plays an essential role in the Use synonyms
culture
and I will demonstrate my point of view during Use synonyms
this
essay.
On the one hand, Linking Words
the
numerous Correct article usage
apply
people
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Add a missing verb
are concern
concern
that cultural Replace the word
concerned
values
will be eroded if they are used for making money because it Use synonyms
express
that they Change the verb form
expresses
are
not respect Verb problem
do
culture
. The reason Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
is that exhibits seem to be ruined more easily by human impacts. Change preposition
for this
For instance
, statues displayed in a museum may be touched and physically affected by a number of visitor flocks Linking Words
lead
to statues can be demolished gradually. Wrong verb form
leading
Moreover
, there are many travel companies Linking Words
these day
which pay more attention to Change the determiner
this day
these days
build
luxurious and new Wrong verb form
building
building
, typically as the increasing number of modern resorts and comfortable hotel systems in order to attract more tourists to make a profit for themselves without Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
regarding
to cultural Change the form of the verb
regard
values
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, tourists tend to turn their back Linking Words
with
traditional Change preposition
on
values
and it could make the Use synonyms
culture
less popular.
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On the other hand
, the travel field is a great factor Linking Words
which
the government should consider Change preposition
in which
to invest
because they can take advantage of it to prevent their cultural Change the verb form
investing
values
from deterioration. First of all, enterprises in the travel industry have enough resources and abilities to maintain the original condition of Use synonyms
heritages
. T í obvious that national heritages need to be conserved properly by professionals. Fix the agreement mistake
heritage
Secondly
, Linking Words
tourism
plays a vital role in advertising Use synonyms
the
cultural Correct article usage
apply
values
to not only local Use synonyms
people
but Use synonyms
also
overseas ones. Linking Words
Therefore
, the Linking Words
culture
would become more prevalent to many Use synonyms
travelers
.
In conclusion, Change the spelling
travellers
although
many Linking Words
people
think that Use synonyms
tourism
should have an obligation about the deterioration of Use synonyms
culture
, I always hold an opposite view that cultural Use synonyms
values
could be sustained in their initial condition and value of the Use synonyms
tourism
sector.Use synonyms
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