the graph below gives an information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions from 2030 and 2040. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph shows the percentage of the population of people living in the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020 and the projected growth by 2040.

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, all the four countries experienced an upward trend by the end of the period.

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the Philippines was the most populated country at the beginning of the period, Malaysia's growth rate outnumbered it by the end of the projected period. In 1970, the Philippines had about 32% of the total population.

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figure rose gradually until it reached its highest point at approximately half and saw some fluctuations.

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, it is estimated to reach a value of around 50% in 2040 which is lower as compared to Malaysia which was

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at exactly 30% and grew gradually until it became the most populated country by 2040 with a figure of around four-fifths. Indonesia and Thailand

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saw a similar trend from 1970 to 2000 with a figure of less than one-

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, Indonesia's growth outnumbered that of Thailand in 2010 (approximately 41%) and is expected to be the second-largest city by 2040 (closely 60%).

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

184 words

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the graph below gives an information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions from 2030 and 2040. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You recently purchased an item from a local store, but you are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter: Describe the item you bought and why you need it. Explain why you are not happy with it. Say what you would like the manager to do.

Some people believe that anyone can create art, such as painting, poetry, music, etc. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.