some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. others beleive they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The discussion on whether highly expert
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where they were trained or they should migrate to another
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professionals should practice where they get their training,
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to choose where they want to
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pursue
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they have some
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the mankind. On the one hand, there are some plausible reasons
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why
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should be free to
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in any
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. It requires quite a few years of studies and training to
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become
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such
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as doctors or engineers.
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work
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hard to obtain that achievement and most of the
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it requires lots of investment
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training and study.
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doctors go abroad to finish their MBBS degree or higher degrees which demands a significant amount of money to
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.
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future job.
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professionals
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the
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hard to provide a job as they
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, which is why
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like to migrate
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country
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for good opportunities.
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,
experts
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should serve the
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where they get their training for some important reasons.
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professionals
have some
resposibilities
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responsibilities
toward the
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and the
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which assist them
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an expert in their field. If all
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leave the
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there will be no one to help the
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and it will hamper the
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.
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, by working in the same
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professionals
will encourage the young
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to follow the same and serve the
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betterment of the
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. to recapitulate,
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believe that
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proffesionals
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professionals
can choose any
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to practice in their field but they should remember the
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where they had their training and
work
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for it in any way that can aid in the amelioration of the
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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