The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given bar chart depicts the
number
of Australian males and females doing regular physical activity which are divided by age
groups in 2010.
Overall
, Australians doing physical exercise regularly were dominated by women
. In addition
, the middle age
group
(between 45 to 64) contributed the highest number
of the population.
According to
the male data, the biggest percentage came from the youngest age
at over half. Then
, it followed by the 25 to 34 age
brackets at 42.2%. Meanwhile, the adult category has the lowest proportion at only 39.5%. Furthermore
, the 45 - 54-year-old women
made up 43.1%, which was above the adult group
slightly. Additionally
, the middle age
and the oldest contributed a similar number
at 45.1% and 46.7%, respectively.
Moving on to the women
graph, while
the youngest group
was the highest number
for the men, that of women
only at 47.7%. Then
, the young adults made up under a half. Moreover
, the trend was increased in 35 to 44 brackets at 52.5%. The female population doing physical activity regularly reached a peak at
the middle Change preposition
in
age
group
of 45 - 54 and 55 - 64 years old at 53.3% and 53%, respectively. Finally
, the oldest category constituted 47.1%.Submitted by zakiyaartanti19 on
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