The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given bar chart depicts the
number
of Australian males and females doing regular physical activity which are divided by Use synonyms
age
groups in 2010.
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Overall
, Australians doing physical exercise regularly were dominated by Linking Words
women
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the middle Linking Words
age
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group
(between 45 to 64) contributed the highest Use synonyms
number
of the population.
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According to
the male data, the biggest percentage came from the youngest Linking Words
age
at over half. Use synonyms
Then
, it followed by the 25 to 34 Linking Words
age
brackets at 42.2%. Meanwhile, the adult category has the lowest proportion at only 39.5%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the 45 - 54-year-old Linking Words
women
made up 43.1%, which was above the adult Use synonyms
group
slightly. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the middle Linking Words
age
and the oldest contributed a similar Use synonyms
number
at 45.1% and 46.7%, respectively.
Moving on to the Use synonyms
women
graph, Use synonyms
while
the youngest Linking Words
group
was the highest Use synonyms
number
for the men, that of Use synonyms
women
only at 47.7%. Use synonyms
Then
, the young adults made up under a half. Linking Words
Moreover
, the trend was increased in 35 to 44 brackets at 52.5%. The female population doing physical activity regularly reached a peak Linking Words
at
the middle Change preposition
in
age
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group
of 45 - 54 and 55 - 64 years old at 53.3% and 53%, respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, the oldest category constituted 47.1%.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, age, women, group with synonyms.
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