A friend of yours has recently written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at your workplace in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell your friend how you feel about the problem explain how you faced a similar situation in the past suggpst possible solutions to the problem
Dear Mary,
I hope you're fine. It's been a long time since we met but after I got your letter I was so elated.
I understand your issues related to the people around you in your new job. I'd gone through the same situation a year back
thus
, I can help you to solve this
problem. They are showing their rude character may be to mould you better in your career so, don't take that personally.
During my initial days in my workplace, two years ago, one of my senior colleagues always instructed me to improve my relationship with customers, which made me sad at that time but now I'm so happy that I'd improved in my weakness and that senior worker became my best friend in the company.
I want you to look into your weaker part and work hard to correct that. I'm sure you can do that and you will become a good worker in your firm. If you need any more assistance, always feel free to ask me, I'm here to help you and don't worry my friend.
I believe this
letter will make you more confident and I am looking forward to hearing from you.Submitted by ansamerrin987 on
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coherence cohesion
Organize the letter in a more logical and cohesive manner. Use clear paragraph structures to convey your ideas effectively.
task achievement
Ensure that the content of the letter fully addresses the task requirements. Include a more detailed explanation of how you faced a similar situation in the past and provide specific solutions to your friend's problem.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,