The table shows the number of visitors to Edinburgh Zoo during the year before and and after 2 pandas were introduced . The charts show the result of surveyss asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visits, during the two periods.

The table shows the number of visitors to Edinburgh Zoo during the year before and and after 2 pandas were introduced . The charts show the result of surveyss asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visits, during the two periods.
The table gives information about the
amount
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number
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of
people
who visited the zoo before and after the introduction of
pandas
as well as
their responses between two years. Let's have a look:
Overall
, there have been considerable changes, the most noticeable is the increase
of
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visitors after
pandas'
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the pandas'
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arrival.
According to
statistics, during the
year
before
pandas
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there were 74000 customers.
However
, a
year
after
this
number showed an upward trend and enlarged by 8000 visitors, which indicates that
pandas
' appearance is the reason for the place's popularity and
people
's satisfaction. In the
year
before
pandas
, almost 35 per cent of
people
tended to be more dissatisfied and the number of "good" responses was half of all the reviews,
while
during the next
year
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this
number increased by 75 per cent. It is obvious that the amount of very dissatisfied
people
decreased by 5 per cent, so it distinctly improved the situation.
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