The table shows the number of visitors to Edinburgh Zoo during the year before and and after 2 pandas were introduced . The charts show the result of surveyss asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visits, during the two periods.
The table gives information about the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
who visited the zoo before and after the introduction of pandas
as well as
their responses between two years. Let's have a look:
Overall
, there have been considerable changes, the most noticeable is the increase of
visitors after Change preposition
in
pandas'
arrival.
Correct article usage
the pandas'
According to
statistics, during the year
before pandas
there were 74000 customers. Add a comma
,pandas
However
, a year
after
this
number showed an upward trend and enlarged by 8000 visitors, which indicates that pandas
' appearance is the reason for the place's popularity and people
's satisfaction.
In the year
before pandas
, almost 35 per cent of people
tended to be more dissatisfied and the number of "good" responses was half of all the reviews, while
during the next year
Add a comma
,year
this
number increased by 75 per cent. It is obvious that the amount of very dissatisfied people
decreased by 5 per cent, so it distinctly improved the situation.Submitted by aida.ai2000 on
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