the map below shows an industerial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site

the map below shows an industerial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the map below shows an industerial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site
the map illustrates the transformation of an industrial
area
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which will take place in the town of
Norbition
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Nutrition
.
overall
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, the industrial
area
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will be converted into an urban
area
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this
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transformation includes increasing the number of houses, schools and playgrounds. at the centre of the
area
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, around the
square
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, a new root will be constructed to the northwest and at the southwest of the
square
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shops will be built. on the opposite
side
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of the
square
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, factories will be replaced by houses along the
side
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of the road and on the left
side
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the unused
area
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will be a playground
area
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with a view of the river.
at the end
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of
this
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road , a school will be erected.
moreover
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, the north
side
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of the river could be reached by a bridge which will be built
at the end
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of the new street which will be started at the north of the
square
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. a part of the farmland on the north
side
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of the river will be replaced by a residential
area
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. at the south of the
square
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at the
,
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intersection a smaller
square
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will be placed.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, square, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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