Transport Preferences Among Young people in four countries

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the popularity of three means of
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among
youngsters
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in four
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namely,The
UK
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,the US,
France
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as well as
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Italy in 2000.
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,it is evident that the car is by far the most popular
modes
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of
transport
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among young
people
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in all
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,apart from
France
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.
when
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it comes to
bicycle
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that is
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second
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the second
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most used
transport
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by young
people
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in four
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,especially in
France
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.
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,bicycle is the second most common mode of
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in the US. Looking at the details,over 70% of
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youngsters
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utilize cars that trend is the highest among other
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and
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this
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is almost twice as high as the figure for
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.Obviously,in the
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Uk
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and
US
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the US
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the percentage of young
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are same,at 60%. As for bicycles,
France
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takes up the leading position with under 50% of
youngsters
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using them.
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, in the
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30% of
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utilize them,
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the US and Italy approximately 10% of young
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ride them. Motorcycles
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are the least popular means of
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in all
countries
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,except for
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the
th
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the
US,where 30% of young
people
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opt for
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type of
transport
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and
also
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in the
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Uk
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,
France
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and Italy approximately 10% of
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young people
youngpeople
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young people
riding
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them

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