Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to suggest a guest speaker in the upcoming series of talks

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by your bookshop. I am Jennifer Ramos, residing at 16th Avenue, Oxford Street. I read on Sunday Tabuloid that you are inviting

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from the public for guest speakers for

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literature festival organised by your establishment. I would like to suggest Mr. John Onasis, a

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novalist living in our town. He has written several thriller novels and short stories. One of his novels

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the Acadamy Award

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became the best seller in that year. He is

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a good speaker and a motivational trainer. He

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a wonderful informative

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Alaska

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attended. He included contemporary examples and incidents in his

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several people. I will share his address

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letter, which may help you to reach him. Let me know if you require more information about Mr. John. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos

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