the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. summarise the inmformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph represents the information about how many shops were open and
close
in a country from the year 2011 to 2018.
Replace the word
closed
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
shop
openings followed a downward trend, Use synonyms
whereas
the number of Linking Words
shop
closures Use synonyms
flactuated
over the years Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
except
a Add the preposition
forexcept
drastical
Correct your spelling
drastic
fall
in 2015.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, The amount of Linking Words
shop
opened for Use synonyms
the
customers were approximately 8,500 in 2011, which dropped about half the amount in 2012 to around 4,000. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, there was a Linking Words
risein
Correct your spelling
rise in
shop
opening numbers in 2013 and 2014 more or less 6,000 before a Use synonyms
fall
in 2015 which is around 4,000. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in 2016 and 2017 the Linking Words
shop
openings Use synonyms
were remain
steady and followed a slight Wrong verb form
remained
fall
in 2018 Use synonyms
about
3,000.
Change preposition
of about
In contrast
, the number of Linking Words
shop
closed were around 6,400 in 2011 and followed a slight Use synonyms
flactuation
in 2012 and 2013. Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
However
, there was a Linking Words
drastical
Correct your spelling
drastic
fall
in the amount of Use synonyms
shop
closures which was down to 500 in 2015 and Use synonyms
then
rose to 5,100 in 2016 and remain steady in 2017 and 2018 collectively.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, fall with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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