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The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
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The bar graph illustrates the
data
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 on rates of employment in six different countries
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;
Australia
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,
Switzerland
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,
Iceland
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, the
UK
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, New
Zealand
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 and the
USA
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 in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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 it can be seen that male
employees
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 in
Iceland
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 show the highest percentage among the six countries in both 1995 and 2005.
Furthermore
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, in
Switzerland
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, female
employees
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 stood the largest percentage in 1995 and 2005. Looking at the male and female
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 sets in 2005 in more detail it is evident that approximately 83% of male
employees
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 were in
Iceland
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 which increased significantly from 70.50% in 1995
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Australia
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,
Switzerland
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, and the
UK
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 show 69%, 79%, and 71% respectively in 2005. The
USA
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 and New
Zealand
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 represent similar
data
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 about 70.50% of male
employees
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.
On the other hand
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,
Switzerland
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 provides the highest
data
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 on female
employees
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 accounting for 69% which
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 rose from 56% in 1995. The
data
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 of women continuously lower than men
employees
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 in
Australia
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,
Iceland
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, the
UK
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, New
Zealand
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 and the
USA
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 were 39%, 51%,61%, 41% and 60.5% respectively. Turning to the men and women
data
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 sets in 1995 in more detail
it is clear that
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 71%, 65%, 56% and 55% of male
employees
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 were in
Iceland
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,
Switzerland
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,
Australia
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 and the
UK
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while
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 New
Zealand
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 and the
USA
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 remained almost same
data
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 on 60% in 1995.
In addition
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, women worker rates in
Switzerland
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 stood at 56% which was the largest in 1995 among six countries.
Australia
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,
Iceland
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, the
UK
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, New
Zealand
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 and the
USA
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 show 36%, 42%, 51%, 25% and 45% respectively for female workers in 1995.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words data, australia, switzerland, iceland, uk, zealand, usa, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rates
  • economic indicators
  • comparison
  • trends
  • improvements
  • declines
  • anomalies
  • fluctuating
  • economic policy
  • financial conditions
  • technological advancements
  • educational levels
  • standards of living
  • poverty rates
  • well-being
  • implications
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