The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
The bar graph illustrates the
data
on rates of employment in six different countries
i.e
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i.e.
;
Australia
,
Switzerland
,
Iceland
, the
UK
, New
Zealand
and the
USA
in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
it can be seen that male
employees
in
Iceland
show the highest percentage among the six countries in both 1995 and 2005.
Furthermore
, in
Switzerland
, female
employees
stood the largest percentage in 1995 and 2005. Looking at the male and female
data
sets in 2005 in more detail it is evident that approximately 83% of male
employees
were in
Iceland
which increased significantly from 70.50% in 1995
while
Australia
,
Switzerland
, and the
UK
show 69%, 79%, and 71% respectively in 2005. The
USA
and New
Zealand
represent similar
data
about 70.50% of male
employees
.
On the other hand
,
Switzerland
provides the highest
data
on female
employees
accounting for 69% which
also
rose from 56% in 1995. The
data
of women continuously lower than men
employees
in
Australia
,
Iceland
, the
UK
, New
Zealand
and the
USA
were 39%, 51%,61%, 41% and 60.5% respectively. Turning to the men and women
data
sets in 1995 in more detail
it is clear that
71%, 65%, 56% and 55% of male
employees
were in
Iceland
,
Switzerland
,
Australia
and the
UK
while
New
Zealand
and the
USA
remained almost same
data
on 60% in 1995.
In addition
, women worker rates in
Switzerland
stood at 56% which was the largest in 1995 among six countries.
Australia
,
Iceland
, the
UK
, New
Zealand
and the
USA
show 36%, 42%, 51%, 25% and 45% respectively for female workers in 1995.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words data, australia, switzerland, iceland, uk, zealand, usa, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rates
  • economic indicators
  • comparison
  • trends
  • improvements
  • declines
  • anomalies
  • fluctuating
  • economic policy
  • financial conditions
  • technological advancements
  • educational levels
  • standards of living
  • poverty rates
  • well-being
  • implications
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