The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
The bar graph illustrates the
data
on rates of employment in six different countries i.e
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i.e.
Australia
, Switzerland
, Iceland
, the UK
, New Zealand
and the USA
in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
it can be seen that male employees
in Iceland
show the highest percentage among the six countries in both 1995 and 2005. Furthermore
, in Switzerland
, female employees
stood the largest percentage in 1995 and 2005.
Looking at the male and female data
sets in 2005 in more detail it is evident that approximately 83% of male employees
were in Iceland
which increased significantly from 70.50% in 1995 while
Australia
, Switzerland
, and the UK
show 69%, 79%, and 71% respectively in 2005. The USA
and New Zealand
represent similar data
about 70.50% of male employees
. On the other hand
, Switzerland
provides the highest data
on female employees
accounting for 69% which also
rose from 56% in 1995. The data
of women continuously lower than men employees
in Australia
, Iceland
, the UK
, New Zealand
and the USA
were 39%, 51%,61%, 41% and 60.5% respectively.
Turning to the men and women data
sets in 1995 in more detail it is clear that
71%, 65%, 56% and 55% of male employees
were in Iceland
, Switzerland
, Australia
and the UK
while
New Zealand
and the USA
remained almost same data
on 60% in 1995. In addition
, women worker rates in Switzerland
stood at 56% which was the largest in 1995 among six countries. Australia
, Iceland
, the UK
, New Zealand
and the USA
show 36%, 42%, 51%, 25% and 45% respectively for female workers in 1995.Submitted by jonahid.stu20ju on
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