The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development.
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The maps illustrate information about the current Islip town centre and its development plan for the future.
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it is clear that
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Slip town will be developed into a bigger town which has more houses, facilities and wider roads. The main street of the city will be changed to a walking way only for pedestrians. First of all, shops on the northern side of the current main roadway will be demolished and rebuilt into several facilities
such
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as a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park and new housing with a driveway to the housing area,
while
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shops on the south of the main street are still located at the same place. A new housing area will be constructed and the park will be resized to a smaller area
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the school has no change. In terms of the roads,
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the main street will be altered to a walking way for pedestrians only, the current road will be expanded and extended from the school to the east to connect to the current road by the park. Not only the southern side of the city but
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the northern road is going to be built as a dual carriageway and the whole new two-lane roads will act as a big roundabout.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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