international travel should be restricted, since this practice have impacted negatively to the environment.

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international travel should be restricted
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tourism
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of business, which is linked to
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globalization
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increased the vision of international
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. With the development of international business,
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companies around the world have
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, with the need to close international business and to keep the relations with those international companies. As we can see, the world by itself shows us the big impact that the improvement of economic
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has had in many countries worldwide. Most of those developments could be done by implementing
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sustainable development,
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wealth, which caused harm to ecosystems that the earth is facing currently. At the same time,
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tourism
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causes a huge negative impact
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nature when
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with the environment. The cruises are a good example
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can cause terrible negative
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to natural habits. Many of those ships have
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same routes for
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time, causing the
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of tons
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the ocean, causing
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of many marine species. A good measure to control
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, which can create a healthy environment and
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mentally healthier
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on with harmony measure which allows
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and being
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