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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first tie this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a campling holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Reggie, It is great to know that you're intending to go for a camping
holiday
 in the coming
summer
, and
also
 thank you for taking me into confidence for some advice. I think you should take the opportunity and make it
this
summer
. I think that you should go on a camping
holiday
 because ,from my past camping experience, I can say that you'll quite enjoy it. After all,
this
 camping
holiday
 will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the wilderness and observe nature in its true habitat. You can
also
 go to a nearby lake for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do. But, the best thing about
this
 camping
holiday
 will be that it'll actually improve your mood and rejuvenate you like nothing else. Having said that, there are some disadvantages of
such
 a camping
holiday
 as well,
such
 as sharing bathrooms with other people at the campsite, bad weather, and dealing with bug bites and dangerous animals. Anyway, I
also
 would have loved to go camping with you
this
summer
, but since my cousin is visiting me from abroad
this
summer
, I'll have to give up on that idea. Take care and stay fine. Warm wishes, Carlos
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