The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the information about the people born in and out of
Australia
.
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Overall
, the bar shows the percentage of Linking Words
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population
who spends their lives living in Add an article
the population
cities
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town
and in rural Fix the agreement mistake
towns
areas
of Use synonyms
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australia
.
In the year 1995, Change the capitalization
Australia
on
Change preposition
apply
a
average of 50 people born in Change the article
an
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australia
Change the capitalization
Australia
occupies
Wrong verb form
occupied
cities
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whereas
,Linking Words
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Add an article
the town
town
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towns
has been
occupied by only Wrong verb form
were
fifth
of their Correct article usage
a fifth
population
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rural
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with rural
areas
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percent
stays between them. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, individuals born outside the nation Linking Words
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
largel
moved to Correct your spelling
largely
cities
at a Use synonyms
percent
of 60, but, Replace the word
percentage
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town
Add an article
the town
population
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was
slightly decreased, Unnecessary verb
apply
around
40 Change preposition
with around
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
australians
likely to live in rural Change the capitalization
Australians
areas
.
In the year 2010, Use synonyms
cities
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has been
mostly used by Wrong verb form
were
peoples
born outside Fix the agreement mistake
people
Australia
, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, rural Linking Words
areas
have seen a downtrend in the contribution.In parallel, Use synonyms
same
number of Correct article usage
the same
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population
have used rural Add an article
the population
areas
and Use synonyms
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town
, and over 60% of people Fix the agreement mistake
towns
loved
to spend their lives in Wrong verb form
love
cities
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, population, cities, town, areas with synonyms.
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