The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the information about the people born in and out of
Australia
.
Overall
, the bar shows the percentage of population
who spends their lives living in Add an article
the population
cities
,town
and in rural Fix the agreement mistake
towns
areas
of australia
.
In the year 1995, Change the capitalization
Australia
on
Change preposition
apply
a
average of 50 people born in Change the article
an
australia
Change the capitalization
Australia
occupies
Wrong verb form
occupied
cities
,whereas
,Add an article
the town
town
Fix the agreement mistake
towns
has been
occupied by only Wrong verb form
were
fifth
of their Correct article usage
a fifth
population
,rural
Change preposition
with rural
areas
percent
stays between them. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, individuals born outside the nation has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
largel
moved to Correct your spelling
largely
cities
at a percent
of 60, but, Replace the word
percentage
town
Add an article
the town
population
was
slightly decreased, Unnecessary verb
apply
around
40 Change preposition
with around
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
australians
likely to live in rural Change the capitalization
Australians
areas
.
In the year 2010, cities
has been
mostly used by Wrong verb form
were
peoples
born outside Fix the agreement mistake
people
Australia
, on the other hand
, rural areas
have seen a downtrend in the contribution.In parallel, same
number of Correct article usage
the same
population
have used rural Add an article
the population
areas
and town
, and over 60% of people Fix the agreement mistake
towns
loved
to spend their lives in Wrong verb form
love
cities
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