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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The diagram provides information about the difference between now and after development in the area of an airport.
Overall
, it is obvious that the rebuilding airport will be larger than now. The significant change will be the area of the gates, it will increase to eighteen gates in the front of the airport. With the expanding space, the walkway will change into the sky train which will run from the first gate to the location where is between the ninth and tenth
gate
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gates
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.
Then
, the plot which is between the security passport control and the first gate will become shops. Now, there is only one check
in
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at
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 the entrance of the departures, which will add one check-in table
that is
 a cafe now and the cafe will move to the corner of
departures
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the departures
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.
Moreover
, the empty area in the arrivals will make good use of it,
such
 as
cafe
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a cafe
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 and ATM.
Furthermore
, it will increase more place in the for car hire.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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