Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are many ideas for what is the main

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environment

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problem

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of our time. Some people say that the main environmental

problem

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in

this

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period is the moss of particular species of

plants

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and

animals

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others believe that there are more important environmental

problems

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. On the one hand, people believe that the disappearance of some specific

plants

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and

animals

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may lead

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main

problem

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of our

environment

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Plants

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can usually produce oxygen and absorb the

greenhouses

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gases during their breathing, and

animals

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can help to wipe out the pests when they are eating.

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,

plants

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and

animals

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act as

an

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important

character

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in

protect

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environment

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.

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, others think that there are more environmental

problems

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more important than the ideas from the above. Global warming and over-use

plastic

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products are more likely to cause serious environmental

problems

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. The rising of sea level is an important

evident

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evidence

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of global warming. As the sea level

rise

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, flooding can

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more often, which will damage humans’ housing and make them homeless. Using a large amount of plastic products will not just more damage

of

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our

environment

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during burning and

destroying

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, but

also

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harm

for

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apply

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animals

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animals'

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health if they eat those plastics carelessly. In my opinion, I agree with the

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group. The serious environmental

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not mainly

cause

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caused

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by the disappearance of

animals

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and

plants

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, but

more

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is more

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likely

lead

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to

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by

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the

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human factors. Not enough but including

causing

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global warming and

overuse

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the overuse

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plastic

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things. From the above example, I

clear

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mentioned that the actions

from

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humans will cause serious

problems

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more than the extinction of

animals

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and

plants

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.