You recently booked a part-time course at a college . you now need to cancel your booking. write a letter to the college adaministrator . In your letter say which part-time course you booked. explain why you need to cancel your booking. ask about booking a different course.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask you to cancel my

course

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. I have booked a

course

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related to AUTOCAD for civil engineers , and

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time

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the time

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this

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course

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is during the week in the afternoon but these days I am really tied_up and I have a hectic_lifestyle and I do not have enough

time

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to arrive at the class on

time

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thus

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I should cancel

this

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course

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. I saw your website

last

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night and on your website was written that students can cancel their

course

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before

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apply

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hours from

sign

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signing

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up and the institute will return the money. ,

Actually

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,Actually

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I am looking for a

course

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at the weekend because during the week I'm busy as a bee . If you had a

course

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in my free

time

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, I would apply for that so please let me know about your holiday teaching or sign me in for the same class as I booked for the weekend. thank you for your help and support in advance. yours faithfully SAED

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

170 words

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You recently booked a part-time course at a college . you now need to cancel your booking. write a letter to the college adaministrator . In your letter say which part-time course you booked. explain why you need to cancel your booking. ask about booking a different course.

The world is heavily dependent on oil for energy, which is unsustainable due to global warming. What future resource do you think will take oil’s place? Why do you think this?

Because of the rapid development of technology, it has been becoming easier for people to work from home. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of working from home

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in theirlocal area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or anegative trend?