You recently booked a part-time course at a college . you now need to cancel your booking. write a letter to the college adaministrator . In your letter say which part-time course you booked. explain why you need to cancel your booking. ask about booking a different course.

#course #college #adaministrator

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask you to cancel my

course

. I have booked a

course

related to AUTOCAD for civil engineers , and

time

Correct article usage

the time

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this

course

is during the week in the afternoon but these days I am really tied_up and I have a hectic_lifestyle and I do not have enough

time

to arrive at the class on

time

thus

I should cancel

this

course

. I saw your website

last

night and on your website was written that students can cancel their

course

before

Change preposition

apply

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hours from

sign

Wrong verb form

signing

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up and the institute will return the money. ,

Actually

Add a comma

,Actually

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I am looking for a

course

at the weekend because during the week I'm busy as a bee . If you had a

course

in my free

time

, I would apply for that so please let me know about your holiday teaching or sign me in for the same class as I booked for the weekend. thank you for your help and support in advance. yours faithfully SAED

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6 paragraphs

170 words

7.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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You recently booked a part-time course at a college . you now need to cancel your booking. write a letter to the college adaministrator . In your letter say which part-time course you booked. explain why you need to cancel your booking. ask about booking a different course.

news media has become more infulential in peoples lives. some believe it is a negative development. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some poeple say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Many people say that movies and TV programs affect us negatively while others say that they are two influential and useful media for us . How do movies and TV affect us ?