You recently booked a part-time course at a college . you now need to cancel your booking. write a letter to the college adaministrator . In your letter say which part-time course you booked. explain why you need to cancel your booking. ask about booking a different course.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask you to cancel my

course

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. I have booked a

course

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related to AUTOCAD for civil engineers , and

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time

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the time

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this

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course

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is during the week in the afternoon but these days I am really tied_up and I have a hectic_lifestyle and I do not have enough

time

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to arrive at the class on

time

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thus

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I should cancel

this

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course

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. I saw your website

last

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night and on your website was written that students can cancel their

course

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before

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apply

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hours from

sign

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signing

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up and the institute will return the money. ,

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I am looking for a

course

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at the weekend because during the week I'm busy as a bee . If you had a

course

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in my free

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, I would apply for that so please let me know about your holiday teaching or sign me in for the same class as I booked for the weekend. thank you for your help and support in advance. yours faithfully SAED

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

170 words

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