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It is better to buy just afew expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#afew #clothes #lots
It is generally believed that buying a few original
clothes
 is more cost-effective than having a great deal number of cheap or fake
clothes
. I tend to agree with those people as inexpensive goods have low quality and you should buy new ones every month.
To begin
 with , famous companies produce
the
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dresses or shoes with high quality and at high prices. Supposedly the NIKE factory makes sneakers or T-shirts which people can use
them
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for various years but if you choose Chinese stuff for running or wear every day he or she can use them just for 6 months.
Although
 NIKE product is expensive, It is worth it and their price is reasonable there is a popular proverb in ENGLAND which says we are not enough wealthy to shop every day.
Moreover
 , suits in brand stores are more beautiful than suits in unknown stores,
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 ZARA has hired
professionals
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 designer and their jeans or their shoes are really eyecatching and I can bet that you can't find something like
this
 in low-level brands and most of the chines sell old fashion design.
however
, it can not be denied that sometimes you can buy something very affordable and with nice colours and great stuff or buy expensive
clothes
 with abysmal shape. By way of conclusion , it appears to me that it is advisable to buy 1 original
clothes
 is better than buying 10 fake
clothes
 and I agree with those people as expensive
clothes
 have their merit and their advantages.
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