The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
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The given two maps display the Olympic and Paralympic
Village
at
the year 2000 and in the present day .
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the maps give information about the renovation work done during the year.
First of all , in the west of the village
parking
lot has been extended to the fullest , Correct article usage
the parking
on the other hand
, car parking in the southern east has moved to the north side of the complex. On comparing fitness centre
, the present day has enlarged space than in 2000. The welcome Fix the agreement mistake
centres
centre
has been slightly moved away from its origin.
The empty building in the south is
reconstructed for medical Wrong verb form
was
purpose
for the athletes, Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
furthermore
, the athlete accommodation had
taken away and replaced with Verb problem
was
disabled
athlete hostel.Followed by, two new athlete stays Correct article usage
a disabled
has
been opened in the south region.The car parking is made into Correct subject-verb agreement
have
multi-faith
Correct article usage
a multi-faith
centre
.Finally
, welcome
Correct article usage
a welcome
centre
and village
square are added to the centre
of the village
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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