In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
In the recent past, buyers have started buying from large shopping complexes for day shopping which has resulted in the closure of local stores.
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can buy multiple items in a place, I believe that it is a negative development because small shopkeepers contribute more to a nation's economy.
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, in my opinion, it is only helping corporates to make huge money.
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, in my opinion, buying from local merchants is beneficial for the nation's economic growth.
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