A friend who lives in another city has invited you to an event. You are unable to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Thank him/her for the invitation -Explain why you cannot come -Suggest another time to meet him/her

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Dear Kashish, I hope

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letter finds you well. It has been a long time since I touch-base with you. First of all, congratulations ! on your achievement and I really appreciate that you invited me to become a part of your success. Unfortunately, I cannot make up for your event. As you know, I recently got promoted at my Organisation and my 3 months of probation period is still not over.

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, I cannot accept your invitation.

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, we can make another plan for vacation during the upcoming summer. My cousin's brother from India is

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coming to Canada.

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, we both will visit you. We will have a pleasant time and will have a memorable summer. I hope you will understand my critical situation and accept my apology for

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short notice. If you need any assistance with your event planning, do not hesitate to contact me. Best Regards, Alex

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Sep 28, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

thank you so much for the invitation
I was delighted to hear from you
the event sounds fantastic
I really appreciate your thoughtfulness
I am afraid I will not be able to make it
please accept my apologies
a prior commitment
an urgent work deadline
a family obligation
I have to attend
I am quite disappointed to miss it
make it up to you
catch up properly
would you be free next weekend?
suggest an alternative date
come and stay with me
meet up for dinner
let me know if that suits you

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