The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

The provided pie charts illustrate the rates of

income

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and expenditure on

meal

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meals

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and

clothes

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by an average family in one UK town between

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the year

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year

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years

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2010 and 2013. The units were measured by percentages.

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, it can be clearly seen that

although

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income

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decreased the spending on food and

clothes

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increased,

the

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figure of

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was higher than

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in the majority family.

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, the majority of the family's

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were concentrated in two categories: "

fruit

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&

vegetables

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" and "

meat

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&

fish

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,"

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other categories made up a smaller portion of the

expenses

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throughout the given period. In 2010, from

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overall

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family

income

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at

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29000 only 14000 used in expenditure on

meal

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and

clothes

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.

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, the two

majority

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of

expenses

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were

fruit

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and

vegetables

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and

meat

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and

fish

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at 29% and 26% respectively.

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, the rest of

expenditures

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(dairy products, other food, and

clothes

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)

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accounted for under 20%. In 2013, even though

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experienced

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approximately

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of approximately

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4000 to 25000, the number of

family’s

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families

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spending on

meal

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and

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rose to 15000.

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, there were two highest family expenditures (

fruit

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&

vegetables

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and

meat

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&

fish

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),

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however

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spending on

meat

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and

fish

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exceeded

fruit

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and

vegetables

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comprised

for

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apply

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at 30 % and 23 % respectively. Meanwhile,

others

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types of family

require

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were only around below 20%.