The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the quantity of girls and 100
biys
enrolled in various levels of school Correct your spelling
boys
education
.
Overall
, it is noticebale
that the developed Correct your spelling
noticeable
countries
had the largest number of children, while
developing
Correct article usage
the developing
countries
lowest. Furthermore
, secondary and tertiary education
showed upward trends except primary which showed negligible difference.
To begin
with primary education
, developing countries
accounted for 83 in 1990 which increased to 87 in 1998. Therefore
, in developed countries
Correct pronoun usage
there
were
negligible difference, namely 95 and 96. In terms of secondary Correct subject-verb agreement
was
education
, developed countries
shared similar numbers in both years, namely 98 and 99 roughly but they did not reach a target. The figure for developing countries
had
roughly 72 in 1990, Verb problem
was
while
in 1998 was 82.
With regards to tertiary education
, developing countries
accounted for 66 in 1990 which rose sharply to 75 in 1998. Consequently
, developed countries
in both years reach a target and were the highest type of education
which had the biggest number of children over the period in qustion
.Correct your spelling
question
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