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It is important for people to take risk,both in their proffessional lives and their personal live. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #risk #lives #risks
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 world taking
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 is encouraged to
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 in their professional lives and their personal lives.
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,I personally believe that
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 outweigh the
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 individuals
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achieve
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 of experiences when you out
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 comfort zone.One of the main
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 to growth of personal and professional development.
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Enterprenurs
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Entrepreneurs
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they
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acheive
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 their goals with full
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 and they stand alone without any support in their business.In my opinion,
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 facing
risk
advantages
 outweigh potential demerits.
Similarly
,someone who takes a
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 by travelling alone to
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 place may develop
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 worldview and cultural
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. On the
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other hand
,
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.People who
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 without any knowledge they may lose.
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,as the possibility of failure and the associated consequences.
This
 can range from financial loss to reputational damage,which can have long-lasting effects on an individual's professional and personal life.
To sum up
,
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 taking
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risks
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advantages
advantageous
 and
disadvantages
.I believe that the
advantages
 outweigh the
disadvantages
.By calculated taking risks can develop new skills,gain confidence,and
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achieve
 success.
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