You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The line graphs illustrate the sum of the international and domestic admissions at Australian Universities and how many were registered in each year between 2001 and 2010.

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the total numbers of foreigners were higher than the locals and both categories experienced an upward trend. Regarding, the recruitment, of undergraduates who came from overseas each year gradually increased

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for natives it did not improve throughout the period. When turning to the Australian nations, 400000 were starting their higher education in 2001.

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, twenty times fewer than that of numbers outsiders came to Australia in the same year.

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, the total number of overseas students increased rapidly up to 80000

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of the period. When considering the domestic students,

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figure climbed to 600000 in 2008 and for the rest of the two ,years it remained unchanged.

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the annual commencing of students,

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registration of candidates from foreign countries showed a rapid improvement over the period, candidates from Australia did not enhance their amount significantly. In the beginning,about 10,000 registrations were completed and ended up with 40000

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2010.