The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the changes in the amount of closed
shops
and opened Use synonyms
shops
in a country from 2011 to 2018.
It is obvious to witness that there were most Use synonyms
shops
opened in 2011 and Use synonyms
also
the Linking Words
number
of closed stores was the most in the same year. What's more, the shop closed in 2015 were nearly negligible amounts.
Looking into the data in more detail, the Use synonyms
number
of opening Use synonyms
shops
in 2011 accounted for over 8000, Use synonyms
then
dramatically dropped to under 4000 in the next year. Linking Words
Then
the Linking Words
number
steadily remained between 4000 and 6000 but decreased to 3000 in the Use synonyms
last
year.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the figure for closed Linking Words
shops
showed an Use synonyms
overall
decrease in the duration, there were more than 6000 Linking Words
shops
closed in 2011 and increased slightly in the next 3 years, but fluctuated in 2015 with the Use synonyms
number
of 500. Use synonyms
then
the data was constant with around 5000.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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