the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
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The provided diagram illustrates the electricity's proportion of production and utilisation rate across ten different nations throughout
2014
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period.
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, it is clear from the graph that China and the US are the only two countries that have the highest rate in both creation and consumption
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the rest
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didn't reach half of the top two and remained at the bottom lines throughout the reporting period. Observing the details, it is remarkable that China is the only domain that reach its peak at 5398 billion kWh of production and 5322 billion kWh consumption rates followed by the United States at approximately 4099 of manufacturing and 3866 consuming.
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, contrast Russia and Japan are roughly the same leaving the rest, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea at the lowest levels respectively. To summarise, with what has been analysed and compared it is crucial to highlight that China and the US are more present in electrical fields.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • gigawatt hours (GWh)
  • renewable energy sources
  • non-renewable energy sources
  • industrialization
  • economic activities
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainability
  • energy efficiency
  • power generation
  • grid capacity
  • energy policies
  • consumption patterns
  • energy demand
  • production-consumption disparity
  • environmental impact
  • greenhouse gas emissions
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