the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The provided diagram illustrates the electricity's proportion of production and utilisation rate across ten different nations throughout
2014
period.
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the 2014
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that China and the US are the only two countries that have the highest rate in both creation and consumption whereas
the rest eight-nation
didn't reach half of the top two and remained at the bottom lines throughout the reporting period.
Observing the details, it is remarkable that China is the only domain that reach its peak at 5398 billion kWh of production and 5322 billion kWh consumption rates followed by the United States at approximately 4099 of manufacturing and 3866 consuming. Correct your spelling
nations
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, contrast Russia and Japan are roughly the same leaving the rest, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea at the lowest levels respectively.
To summarise, with what has been analysed and compared it is crucial to highlight that China and the US are more present in electrical fields.Correct word choice
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