the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar graph gives how the
data
on electricity
generation and consumption
changed among ten different countries in 2014.
Overall
it can be seen that China
produced and consumed the highest amount of electricity
whereas
the Korea
Republic showed the lowest production and Correct your spelling
Korean
consumption
of power
. Furthermore
, electricity
generation was lower than usage in Germany.
Looking at the electricity
production data
set in detail it is clear that
China
generated the power
in accounting 5398 billion
KWh
in 2014. On the other hand
, remained
nine countries Wrong verb form
the remaining
such
as the USA, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea produced 4099, 936.2, 871, 618.9, 561.2, 530.7, 526.6 and 485.1 Correct quantifier usage
apply
billion
KWh
respectively which all data
showed lesser than the data
on China
.
Turning to the power
consumption
data
sets it is evident that the Korean Republic gave the lowest data
on electricity
usage in 2014 accounting for 449.5 billion
KWh
. While
China
consumed 5322 billion
KWh
which was the maximum consumption
among the ten countries. 3866, 856.7, 698.8, 499.9, 462.9, 455.8 and 582.5 billion
KHh electricity
were consumed by the USA, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany respectively. Finally
, the generation and usage amount of power
was very close in Russia accounting for 1057 and 1038 billion
KWh
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