the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar graph gives how the
data
on Use synonyms
electricity
generation and Use synonyms
consumption
changed among ten different countries in 2014.
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Overall
it can be seen that Linking Words
China
produced and consumed the highest amount of Use synonyms
electricity
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whereas
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Korea
Republic showed the lowest production and Correct your spelling
Korean
consumption
of Use synonyms
power
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
electricity
generation was lower than usage in Germany.
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it is clear that
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China
generated the Use synonyms
power
in accounting 5398 Use synonyms
billion
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KWh
in 2014. Use synonyms
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the remaining
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as the USA, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea produced 4099, 936.2, 871, 618.9, 561.2, 530.7, 526.6 and 485.1 Correct quantifier usage
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billion
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KWh
respectively which all Use synonyms
data
showed lesser than the Use synonyms
data
on Use synonyms
China
.
Turning to the Use synonyms
power
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consumption
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data
sets it is evident that the Korean Republic gave the lowest Use synonyms
data
on Use synonyms
electricity
usage in 2014 accounting for 449.5 Use synonyms
billion
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KWh
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While
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China
consumed 5322 Use synonyms
billion
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KWh
which was the maximum Use synonyms
consumption
among the ten countries. 3866, 856.7, 698.8, 499.9, 462.9, 455.8 and 582.5 Use synonyms
billion
KHh Use synonyms
electricity
were consumed by the USA, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, the generation and usage amount of Linking Words
power
was very close in Russia accounting for 1057 and 1038 Use synonyms
billion
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KWh
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