You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mrs.Angela, I have been a student of Foreign Languages for two years and I am proud of studying here. I am writing to you to apologise for the cheating in the previous mid-term dated 15th October. It is known that mid-term exams are essential for our grades. That's why every student has to pass them without any tricks. Unfortunately, on that day I was caught using my mobile phone and I am so sorry about

this

situation. I would like to tell you the reason for my fault. Since my mother was ill, I had to take care of her and I did not prepare for my examination well enough.

Therefore

, I needed to utilize my phone during the exam. I promise not to do so again and humbly request your forgiveness. I look forward to receiving your kind mercy soon. Yours sincerely, Bakhtiniso

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

145 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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