The diagram below shows the floor pan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor pan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the difference between 20 years ago and now of the floor of a public
library
.
Overall
, it is obvious that we have a lot of changes in the significant years and many more facilities and amenities for the
customers
such
as self-service machines.
To begin
,with the first plan that will see the central
library
20 years ago.
Firstly
, we have three different sections with multiple genres of
books
, for ,instance adult fiction
books
, children's
books
and many more. In the middle of the place in front of the entrance of the
library
two tables and chairs for the
customers
.
Lastly
, next to the entrance and opposite them we have the enquiry
room
and the reading
room
.
In addition
, with the
second,
plan we saw the
library
today and we noticed a lot of differences. We recognize many facilities for the
customers
, for , instance self-service machines and a cafeteria. These days a number of people do not have the money to get a computer so they come to the
library
to search for anything they need , so now we have a computer
room
.
Furthermore
, they removed the tables and put two sofas in the children's
room
for storytelling. In the end, we have an information desk for any questions the
customers
have and a lecture
room
where their writers can come and read their
books
and signatures for their fans.
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