The map below shows the development of the village Ryemouth between 1995 and present
The map depicts the changes in the rural area of the Ryemouth village in 1995 and nowadays.
Overall
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although
the space has not changed in size, it is obvious that there were some replacements and expansions of some facilities.
Focusing on the fields that were being replaced, in 1995, there was a farmland and forest park in the northeast part of the village. Nowadays, the space has been turned into a sports station consisting of a huge golf course and two tennis courts. Linking Words
Moreover
, the previous shopping districts and the fish market in 1995 have now been changed into restaurants and apartments respectively. Linking Words
Besides
, the fishing port in the south part of the village was Linking Words
also
removed.
Moving on to the facilities that have been expanded, some areas have improved from some time in the past. Linking Words
Firstly
, the residential area at the northwest of the map has been extended from 11 residents to 15 residents. Linking Words
Lastly
, there is Linking Words
also
an addition of a car park near the hotel. In fact, the cafe still remains unchanged between 1995 and the present day.Linking Words
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