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Compare the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800, 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps delineate the development of a town which was located in Brindell and the local area in three different millennia,1800,1900 and 2000.
Overall
, it is important to note that the
right
 corners of the area experienced tangible development in the residential and industrial sectors by allocating a village for workers,
however
, there was no modification in the case of farmland for crops on the left side. Looking at the
right
 side, the woodland, which was in the shape of a quarter of a circle in 1800, had become slightly a half in size by 1900, and again it became smaller
due to
 the construction of Bun Hill Park alongside the woodland in 2000. A farmland for animals which was located on the
right
 bottom corner of the district in 1800 converted into a village for workers, and there were some industrial buildings to the
right
 of
such
 a commercial area in 1900.
However
,
this
 part had witnessed obvious changes in size and number of industrial constructions by 2000.
According to
 the left side, there had not been any changes in Brindell until 2000, when it doubled in size and reshaped.
Moreover
, farmland for crop cultivation in the north-west stayed unchanged during the considered period.
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