he table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides the data for the daily routine of unemployed people in the UK in the
last
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year.
Overall
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most of the morning time was spent looking for jobs by both genders.
However
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biggest part of women
were
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busy with
housework
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in the mornings. First
half
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of the day 61% of unemployed men were busy with job hunting, shopping and
housework
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,
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in the afternoon
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number reduced to 51%.
On the other hand
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, almost
half
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(49%) of women had spent their morning time doing
housework
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, 26% were busy with shopping and only 16% dedicated the first
half
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of the day to searching for a job. In the afternoon, almost the same number of females spent on job hunting and two times fewer women used for shopping and
housework
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. The proportion of people who used the second
half
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of the day for more relaxing activities
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as visiting friends and watching TV significantly increased for both genders.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, half with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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