he table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides the data for the daily routine of unemployed people in the UK in the
last
year. Linking Words
Overall
most of the morning time was spent looking for jobs by both genders. Linking Words
However
biggest part of women Linking Words
were
busy with Change the verb form
was
housework
in the mornings.
First Use synonyms
half
of the day 61% of unemployed men were busy with job hunting, shopping and Use synonyms
housework
, Use synonyms
while
in the afternoon Linking Words
this
number reduced to 51%.
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On the other hand
, almost Linking Words
half
(49%) of women had spent their morning time doing Use synonyms
housework
, 26% were busy with shopping and only 16% dedicated the first Use synonyms
half
of the day to searching for a job. In the afternoon, almost the same number of females spent on job hunting and two times fewer women used for shopping and Use synonyms
housework
.
The proportion of people who used the second Use synonyms
half
of the day for more relaxing activities Use synonyms
such
as visiting friends and watching TV significantly increased for both genders.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, half with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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