Some people think the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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tertiary education is vital for becoming successful in their lives others oppose that
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.From my perspective ,I support the latter
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and I will discuss it in more detail.
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argued that
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education is
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for living in
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dynamic and modern world.
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having any
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prerequisites
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increase your chances of enrollment in any establishment.
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life time
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provide
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you better environment to learn
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of communication.
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,it is most common that
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country economics by getting
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position of employment.
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idea
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contend that there is no necessity to obtain any higher qualification.
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degree we can
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get
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achievements in
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life's
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such
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as Cristiano Ronaldo.
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likewise
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graphic designing,
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and web
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designing by living a higher Standard of
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also
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prove that
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a successful person education is not too necessary.
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points, it can reiterated that for getting achievements in your
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credentials is not too necessary we can
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acquire success by mastering any skill.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university degree
  • specialized knowledge
  • critical thinking skills
  • networking opportunities
  • vocational training
  • self-made entrepreneurs
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  • online courses
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