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Some pople think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work intead of bering put behind bars. To what extend do you agree?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask you about the possibility
to apply
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on
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 the course. I am highly interested in computers and want to gain skills to use
it
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 properly. I think, nowadays
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 is an essential knowledge
that is
 required for any job.
However
, in your
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 it is mentioned that it is necessary to complete an elementary course. It is hard for me to find a suitable one because all those that I saw take too long. It is unnecessary for me to spend
such
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Therefore
, I would like to ask you to make an exception and allow me to enrol in the course. I
might
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 assure you that I
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 not create any
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 for others and will
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 some preparations at home. If it is possible, please, contact me. If you require any additional information, let me know. Yours faithfully, Basil Turkin
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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