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Nowadays, there, large number of coffee shops and fast food vendors on highest Street in towns centres. Why are there so many of these outlets? What effect is this having on the society?

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In today's time, it is very easy for
people
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 to grab coffee from local shops as it has low prices and many other benefits.
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, there are numerous coffee and fast
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 chains on the streets and in major places of society. I strongly believe that
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 fast
food
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 restaurants should be there in crowded places but in a limited way. Over the period of time, the
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 preference of
people
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 has completely changed and more and more
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 like to eat junk
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. To elaborate, many individuals
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 working love to eat and drink from the
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 outlet without even noticing the ingredients of the
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.
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, these outlets target populated areas so that more and more
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 can consume their products.
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, an article in the Times of India says that the brand Starbucks has earned a revenue of 22,000 crores in a financial year, which is almost more than the GDP of Mongolia.
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, to refresh minds, working
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 tend to fall into the scheme and order . So, these brands have the audacity to open more and more cafes in the major places around the city.
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, it can be very harmful to humans as it can have an adverse effect on the human body. To clarify,limiting the consumption of
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food
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 can be fine but eating or drinking regularly can cause a man a lot of other diseases. It is an undeniable fact that younger to fall for the scheme as they do not like to eat healthy which creates a risk of heart failure at a very early stage of their life.
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, a survey was conducted and nearly 80% of teenagers suffer from severe cardiovascular issues.
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, the utilisation of
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 product can be very harmful for the upcoming generation.
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, the usage of fast
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 should be reduced in both adults and teenagers as it can lead to various deadly diseases which can devastate an entire family.
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this
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, the government should make a strict law for
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 hygiene and promote eating more and more healthy
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.

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