You recently made a journey by train. When you got on the train, you realised you had left a bag on the platform. Write a letter to the station manager. In your letter •give details of where and when you left the bag •describe the bag and its contents •suggest how you could get the bag back
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you to discuss an issue that I am facing at the moment. I recently travelled from Toronto to Quebec. The departure time of my journey was 7:00 p.m. on the 15th of Oct 2024. I left my luggage at platform number 32.
The size of the bag is small to medium. It is the black colour of a cloth handbag, resembling tot bags. There is a zip-locked pocket outside and a long ziplock is at the top. There are two handles of the pouch. On one side of the handle, there is a pink colour scarf tied.
I would like to request you to search for that purse, as it contains some of my important documents. If you are able to find it please keep it in the office of the railway station or you can contact me on my mobile number 517-228-4242. I am planning to get back to Toronto after taking leave from my office.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely.
Harpreet Kaur.Submitted by harpreet291kaur on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite