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Some people say international sports event help in world peace? Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, whenever we switch on the television or see the newspaper
people
 are arguing about their favourite sportsperson. some below
this
sports
 event will bring peace worldwide. I completely disagree with
this
 statement and below paragraph I discussed.
Firstly
, every one of us likes to see who represents our country and should win the activity but, when we lost the match they started to show haterade for the opposite community and sometimes they fought as well.
For example
, in India and Pakistan cricket matches when they play most
people
 get excited and start to demotivate other country
people
, you can see the anger they have for each other.
Secondly
, these,
sports
 event shows which country is the best there will be comparisons which can be challenging and difficult to handle the situation.
Furthermore
, in
this
 ,case there are more chances to have differences on Earth.
On the other hand
, international
sports
 are considered as that two communities can be together and bring peace and take sport as a challenge but hate rates.
Such
 as, some
people
 love to watch
sports
 events which them motivated and they can choose their career.
For example
, Messi and Ronaldo when they community enjoy their game.
Furthermore
, some of us all the time looking for some point so they start their arguments.
while
 in the stadium they are creating an environment where
people
 are getting offended which can lead to a war and distance in other nations.
To sum up
, there are some
people
 who are creating issues and few of them come to enjoy. As many of them will not bring any peace in the world.
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