It is believed that students at schools and universities can learn better via technology rather than with teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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believe that
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technology will
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better than the
lecturer
at school.
However
, I disagree with
this
notion. In
this
new era, all education systems
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equipped with high-tech inventions.
Moreover
, some people consider that
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information
on the
internet
will answer their curiosity with
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explanation, whilst sometimes they feel that lecturers somehow doesn't cover their need
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new knowledge.
For instance
, individuals can type their
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about the psychology courses on "how to manage rage" and magically Google will provide various
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of answers, like managing rage in
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or
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children
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, managing rage
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by immediate events or trauma responses, and many others. Eventually, people find it very helpful because they can have
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immediate responses
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their curiosities without waiting any longer to
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someone else.
On the other hand
, people should not believe the
internet
that much since some of the
information
that
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over the
internet
still
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not yet verified about the validity and originality.
However
, teachers already have their credibility proven because they acquired the knowledge from long
researchs
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research
and many workshops.
In addition
, all the teachers
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been tested to see how much they
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on certain courses. A teacher might
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in one area,
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she can have deeper knowledge and valid
information
that can be shared
to
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her students.
For example
, an individual can ask about a plant reproduction to his
lecturer
and a
lecturer
will automatically give
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explanation
also
a few
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because a
lecturer
might have done the research and she completely
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and understood plant reproduction.
To sum up
,
lecturer
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can do better in teaching because their credibility is verified and tested, whilst some
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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that
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obtained from the
internet
is from unknown resources and we can't tell whether the
information
is true or
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a hoax
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.
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