It is believed that students at schools and universities can learn better via technology rather than with teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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believe that

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technology will

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be taught

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better than the

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at school.

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, I disagree with

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notion. In

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new era, all education systems

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equipped with high-tech inventions.

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, some people consider that

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information

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on the

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will answer their curiosity with

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explanation, whilst sometimes they feel that lecturers somehow doesn't cover their need

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new knowledge.

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, individuals can type their

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about the psychology courses on "how to manage rage" and magically Google will provide various

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of answers, like managing rage in

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adults

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or

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children

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by immediate events or trauma responses, and many others. Eventually, people find it very helpful because they can have

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immediate responses

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their curiosities without waiting any longer to

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someone else.

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, people should not believe the

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that much since some of the

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that

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over the

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still

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not yet verified about the validity and originality.

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, teachers already have their credibility proven because they acquired the knowledge from long

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research

and many workshops.

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, all the teachers

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been tested to see how much they

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on certain courses. A teacher might

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have expertise

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in one area,

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and by

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that

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she can have deeper knowledge and valid

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that can be shared

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with

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her students.

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, an individual can ask about a plant reproduction to his

lecturer

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and a

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will automatically give

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explanation

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a few

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because a

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might have done the research and she completely

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and understood plant reproduction.

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,

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lecturer

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the lecturer

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can do better in teaching because their credibility is verified and tested, whilst some

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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that

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obtained from the

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is from unknown resources and we can't tell whether the

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is true or

hoax

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a hoax

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.