It is believed that students at schools and universities can learn better via technology rather than with teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some
have
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apply
strong
believe that Change the word
strongly
the
technology will Correct article usage
apply
taught
better than the Change the verb form
be taught
lecturer
at school. However
, I disagree with this
notion.
In this
new era, all education systems already
equipped with high-tech inventions. Add a missing verb
are already
Moreover
, some people consider that find
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finding
information
on the internet
will answer their curiosity with vary
explanation, whilst sometimes they feel that lecturers somehow doesn't cover their need Wrong verb form
varied
of
new knowledge. Change preposition
for
For instance
, individuals can type their question
about the psychology courses on "how to manage rage" and magically Google will provide various Fix the agreement mistake
questions
type
of answers, like managing rage in Fix the agreement mistake
types
adult
or Fix the agreement mistake
adults
child
, managing rage Fix the agreement mistake
children
causes
by immediate events or trauma responses, and many others. Eventually, people find it very helpful because they can have Wrong verb form
caused
the
immediate responses Correct article usage
apply
of
their curiosities without waiting any longer to Change preposition
to
asking
someone else.
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ask
On the other hand
, people should not believe the internet
that much since some of the information
that all
over the Add a missing verb
is all
internet
still
not yet verified about the validity and originality. Add a missing verb
is still
However
, teachers already have their credibility proven because they acquired the knowledge from long researchs
and many workshops. Correct your spelling
research
In addition
, all the teachers has
been tested to see how much they Change the verb form
have
expert
on certain courses. A teacher might Add a missing verb
are expert
expertise
in one area, Add a missing verb
have expertise
by
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and by
that
she can have deeper knowledge and valid Add a comma
,that
information
that can be shared to
her students. Change preposition
with
For example
, an individual can ask about a plant reproduction to his lecturer
and a lecturer
will automatically give comprehensive
explanation Correct article usage
a comprehensive
also
a few example
because a Change to a plural noun
examples
lecturer
might have done the research and she completely witnesses
and understood plant reproduction.
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witnessed
To sum up
, lecturer
can do better in teaching because their credibility is verified and tested, whilst some Add an article
the lecturer
a lecturer
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
that
obtained from the Correct pronoun usage
apply
internet
is from unknown resources and we can't tell whether the information
is true or hoax
.Correct article usage
a hoax
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