Introduction
There is no denying the fact that we ought to work hard to achieve our goals.
While
it is a commonly held belief that these achievements came from luck, there is Linking Words
also
an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that a mistaken idea.Linking Words
Body paragraph 1
To begin
with, we must work hard for our goals because Linking Words
that is
the role of Linking Words
this
life. Linking Words
In other words
, since we were children, we tried hard to walk and did our best to hold things Linking Words
such
as a pen or spoon. Linking Words
In addition
, these days, we are trying to teach teenagers to work smart and Linking Words
also
; there are goals that now have more than one way to achieve them.Linking Words
Body paragraph 2
Another point to consider is that when we teach people that their achievements are primarily by luck, they will stop doing their tasks. It is
also
possible to say that I will not try to study hard because my degrees depend on my luck. Linking Words
Moreover
, it is unfair that we compare someone who works for 8 hours per day and someone who does not even try to do his best. Linking Words
For example
, nowadays, my brother and I are preparing for the IELTS exam to go to college. I spend 5 hours a day Linking Words
while
my brother tries to avoid studying. It would be unfair if he got a higher band than me.Linking Words
Conclusion
In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that the only way to achieve our aims is to do what we have to do, and we must believe in ourselves.