The bar chart shows the expectation for change of European Young people in the next 20 years in five different areas.

The bar chart shows the expectation for change of European Young people in the next 20 years in five different areas.
The graph illustrates prediction trends of some social aspects traits of the young generation in Europe in the next 2 centuries. It can easily be observed that most of the recorded subjects are expected to experience downsides. The adolescent’s health will likely decline as the predicted percentage of getting worse is almost 60%. An opposite trend will occur for the water pollution in the future because the water condition
also
has a 60% likeliness to decrease.
Additionally
, the quality of food will not even reach 50% of being raised in the time ahead.
Moreover
, young people will
also
have a high chance of enduring air pollution because the air quality has the most negative foreshadowed outcome which is shown by its enormous share of getting worse in the next 20 years.
Nevertheless
,
although
4 out of 5 social aspects being predicted have lower than half a chance to be improved in the future, Young people’s communication seems to be the only one that will be enhanced 2 centuries later with the percentage seemingly greater than 60% of improving.
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