Many people depend on their cars for everyday domestic, social and working needs. However, unlimited use of cars causes a number of problems. What are some of these problems? What can be done to reduce the use of them?

During the
last
few
decades
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cars
have become extremely popular and made people’s lives much more comfortable.
However
,
oversupply
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of
vehicles
may cause
some
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certain problems and, in
this
essay, I am going to write about these issues and try to offer appropriate solutions.
In addition
, I am going to offer
one
of the possible ways
how
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to reduce
a
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number
of transports.
To begin
with, it is necessary to understand that
cars
constantly consume much fuel and transform it into
the
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gas which is like a poison for the environment. It is no matter how much petrol is needed to fill the vehicle
while
the total
number
of transport is too large.
One
of the possible ways to deal with
this
issue is to introduce
the
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strict law which would prohibit people
to buy
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more than
one
car per family.
As a result
, it would cut the total amount of harmful
emission
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emissions
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in the atmosphere and
also
make roads less overcrowded.
On the other hand
, decreasing the
number
of transport is not the only way
how
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humanity can protect
the
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nature and
do
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not feel a lack of
vehicles
. Everybody does know that the new electro car was invented recently. It has
one
very interesting feature;
this
type of
cars
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is worked
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by using the power of electricity. Nowadays, it is extremely
over
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overpriced, but in the near
future
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it would be possible to replace all the engines which use fossils on the alternative variant.
Moreover
, electro
cars
produce less noise which is so important for cities where
this
problem is critical. In conclusion, I would like to say that it is inevitable that humanity will solve all the problems which are related to
the
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cars
. Nowadays, it is obvious that governments have to reduce the
number
of
vehicles
and invest more money to support and make cheaper the new types of
vehicles
which use electricity
instead
of petrol.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • carbon footprint
  • fossil fuel-driven vehicles
  • environmental organizations
  • air quality
  • global climate goals
  • initial purchase price
  • batteries
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • operating costs
  • financially accessible
  • technology advances
  • government incentives
  • transition to electric vehicles
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