The bar chart illustrates the patterns of male and female employment in three different countries: Canada, South Korea, and Sweden, between 2005 and 2015
The bar
chart
illustrates the patterns of male and female employment
in three different countries: Canada
, South Korea
, and Sweden
, between 2005 and 2015. In general, we can see that the percentage of working people increased, with the percentage of women showing the most significant rise.
It’s crystal clear that in the first graph, male employment
in Canada
was almost 60%, and it was the lowest employment
rate in the 2005 males
chart
. However
, in Sweden
and South Korea
, they were approximately between 70 and 80 percent
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per cent
males
. The data shows us the females' chart
always had a fluctuation in 2005.
Take a closer look at the second chart
; there was a fluctuation in both males
and females. In Canada
and Sweden
, females were almost 50%, but in South Korea
, there were almost 30%. In addition
to this
, Canada
and Sweden
were almost the same as
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males
, although
South Korea
had the highest employment
rates in 2015.
Taking everything into account, the major difference between the three countries is that each country had different percentages in 2005 and 2015.Submitted by haticecoza on
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