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The two charts show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in the years 2005 and 2015.

The two charts show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in the years 2005 and 2015.
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The two charts show the percentages of
men
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 and
women
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 in
employment
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 in three countries in the years 2005 and 2015. In general, we can see that the
percentages
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percentage
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 of working people increased, with the proportion of
women
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 showing the most significant rise. In all of the countries covered, and in both years, the number of
men
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 in
employment
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 was greater than the number of
women
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. South Korea has the highest rate of male
employment
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 – approximately 75% in 2005, rising slightly to about 78% in 2015 – and Canada has the lowest – just over 60% in 2005 and 70% in 2015. The proportion of
women
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 in
employment
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 was lower than
men
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 in all of the countries covered over the two years. It was below 50% everywhere in 2005, but the figures had risen by 2015. In Canada, over half of the
women
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 were working, and in
Sweden
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 the figure was exactly 50%.
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, the number of South Korean
women
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 who were working was only about 35% compared with a percentage which was more than double for
men
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 at over 70%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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