The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagram illustrates the data for 5 to
14 year-olds
in Australia Add a hyphen
14-year-olds
took
part in their leisure pursuits. Correct pronoun usage
who took
Overall
, boys
are more active in these hobbies than girls
.
It is immediately clear from the chart that watching TV or videos are
the most popular activity every one involved in their spare time. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
However
, three
in four Change preposition
in three
these
Change preposition
of these
pastime
the Fix the agreement mistake
pastimes
boys
enjoyed much more than girls
. The next most poplular
hobby after spending time on TV is computer games. Almost 80 per cent Correct your spelling
popular
boys
in Australia played electronic games Change preposition
of boys
while
around 60 per cent girls
did. It is similar different in riding Change preposition
of girls
bike
for Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
boys
and girls
. There are 7 in 10 boys
participated in bike riding compared with 6 in 10 girls
.
The only activity girls
enjoyed more than boys
is
Wrong verb form
was
art
and Fix the agreement mistake
arts
craft
. Just over half of Fix the agreement mistake
crafts
girls
made things skillfully and beautifully and a bit higher a third Correct article usage
the girls
boys
did.
The chart is seeming
to demonstrate that Wrong verb form
seems
boys
take part in outdoor activities more than girls
in Australian society.Submitted by duyuyen18 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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