¬Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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believe that the legal

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for

marriage

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is 21. I totally disagree with

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statement. In my point of view,

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at

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age

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lack

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comitment

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commitment

and low

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. In

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20s people still studying and building

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, if they

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at

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age

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they will not be committed to

marriage

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. Commitment is the most important part

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marriage

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and it takes a lot of energy and time from the person.

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, I got married at

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22 I couldn’t finish

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college because of the

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that

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at that time. After that, I tried to get back to college at

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23 but suddenly I

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which was very difficult to focus on studying and taking care of my child. My

life

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was

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until I

get

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finally

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I went back to build my career

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.

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, I believe that

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commitment

need

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someone who is settled in their career and

life

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.

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at

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21 are still financially low,

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lack

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of experience and low job

opportunity

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opportunities

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.

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, it will be very hard to have a successful

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with low money.

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, my cousin married at

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21, she was holding

diploma

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degree. She tried to search for a good salary job

put

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but

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unfortunately she didn’t

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.

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she was struggling to be dependent on her husband.

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, her kids didn’t

had

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enough leisure time because they

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all dependent

in

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their

father

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income.

To conclude

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, I Strongly disagree with the people who want to legalize

age

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21

marriage

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. I do believe that young adult should

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be setteld

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setteld

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settled

with their career future. To have a successful

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marriage

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married

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life

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.