The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The two maps given demonstrate the initial and later of the land because of the construction of some tourism infrastructure.
Overall
Linking Words
, it can be seen that there will be a resort that includes a restaurant, a reception and some accommodation. After the construction, at the west, the beach will known as the place where the tourist can swim. Next to it, there are 6 accommodations around the coconut tree, especially for people who want to live near the beach. It has had footpath that allows visitors can go around more easily. In the middle, there's a reception hall where people can go for information and booking. Around the reception is a vehicle track which is made for visitors to come in or go outside if they want. It
also
Linking Words
has a restaurant in the north to serve the
travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
show examples
meals all day because there
do
Change the verb form
does
show examples
not have any
restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
show examples
except
this
Linking Words
one.
Submitted by cathyngo1512 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: