The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps given demonstrate the initial and later of the land because of the construction of some tourism infrastructure.

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, it can be seen that there will be a resort that includes a restaurant, a reception and some accommodation. After the construction, at the west, the beach will known as the place where the tourist can swim. Next to it, there are 6 accommodations around the coconut tree, especially for people who want to live near the beach. It has had footpath that allows visitors can go around more easily. In the middle, there's a reception hall where people can go for information and booking. Around the reception is a vehicle track which is made for visitors to come in or go outside if they want. It

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has a restaurant in the north to serve the

travelers

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meals all day because there

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does

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not have any

restaurant

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restaurants

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except

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one.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

before and after
transformation
infrastructure
natural features
network of cottages
footpaths
recreational areas
pristine environment
organized lodging facilities
strategically positioned
delineated pathways
untouched nature
accessibility
isolated island experience
enhanced transportation options

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that traveling to other places is not essential to learn about different cultures as one can gain knowledge from books, movies, and the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analyse the two sides of this argument.