The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart shows the way in which
bricks
are made for the building industry.
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Overall
, there are 7 stages in the whole Linking Words
brick producing
Add a hyphen
brick-producing
process
, beginning with the digging up of Use synonyms
clay
and ending with the delivery of the Use synonyms
bridks
to the customers.
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bricks
To begin
, the Linking Words
clay
used to make the Use synonyms
bricks
is dug up from the ground by a large digger.
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This
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clay
is Use synonyms
then
placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the Linking Words
clay
into smaller pieces. A roller assists in Use synonyms
this
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process
. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, sand and water are added to the Linking Words
clay
, and Use synonyms
this
mixture is turned into Linking Words
bricks
by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cut.
Next,
these Use synonyms
bricks
are placed in a drying oven to dry for 24 - 48
hours.
In the subsequent stage, the Use synonyms
bricks
go through a heating and cooling Use synonyms
process
. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and Use synonyms
then
a high temperature (ranging from 200c to 1300c), followed by a cooling Linking Words
process
in a cooling chamber for 48 - 72 hours. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
bricks
are packed and delivered to their destinations.Use synonyms
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